Second Round Editing Done

The editor got back with the re-edited manuscript and now the second round of editing is done on my end. :) 
It was a fun process. The editor has a keen grasp of how to get across the point I am trying to make at any given point in the story, as well as the ability to bring the word pictures I am building into sharper focus. 
"Dying Embers" is going to end up much better for the editor's contribution.